FAVOR TO ASK

I was wondering if you guys could do me a huge favor and check out the novel that I am working on. FEEDBACK WOULD BE GREATLY APPRECIATED. And if you could post feedback on the site, hopefully that can get me more noticed on the site and pull in some viewers that I do not know. The site is: http://www.fictionpress.com/~tokkie24
I think I finally got a first and second chapter that I am finally happy with. I would really appreciate this. Thank you guys so much!!!

(edit) you might need to know which file to look at, haha. The title of the book is "Remnants of a Life Once Divided" haha. It is the first one on the list.